“Teenage”
Chapter:one
I am
standing in front of a billboard having a million thoughts that are just
messing up my brain. The bill board has the word ‘Teenage’ like this:
T- Thrill
E-epic
E-enjoy
N-nice
A-amazing
G-gloom
E-enthusiasm
And what
comes to my mind is something like this…
T-terrific
E-epic
E-enjoy
N-nice
A-annoying
G-guilt
E-envy
Suddenly my
phone starts buzzing, someone is calling.
“Hello!
Jessica where are you?” Someone asked.
“Hello!
Sorry, I got a little sidetracked I’m on my way.” I said.
In case you’re
wondering what’s happening let me give you a little review. I am Jessica miller.
I live in North-west with my parents and a younger sister. North-west is a very
city. I am obsessed with reading and watching movies .The person who just
called was my friend Kristen I am running late for school ,the bus just arrived
and in ten minutes I’m in school . I got of the bus and Kristen is waiting for
me near the bus stop.
“Sup! “I
said waving towards Kristen.
“Did you not
know what sally’s up to today?”
“No why
what’s she doing?”
” I don’t
know. She was being kind to me today “
“Oh boy. Who
cares anyway? Now come on let’s get to class.
I took all
of my classes and now it’s just ten minutes till off time. Like all the high
schools in movies my School does have a queen bee too .actually I don’t care
about the whole queen bees thing well because it’s stupid.
some people
call me nice, caring, sweet and some call me badass, mean and sassy I don’t
understand what’s up with them, all I know is I am nice and caring to people
who are worth it , sassy and mean to those who doesn’t deserve to be talked to
nicely .’Always value people who value you’
that’s my rule.
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Your novel opening is like dictating apart of your teenage life... well most of the teenagers can relate to this.. you should continue writing.. keep up the good work 😁👍
ReplyDeletelooks good so far! looking forward to what happens next ^^
ReplyDeleteso am i :)
DeleteGot my expectations higher! Goodluck ahead ;)
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